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The file “Guideline PRemature Ejaculation ”
This is a very important Guideline for Premature Ejaculation in Dutch..
e a lot of things you can get from it..
Very useful…Prof Waldinger is “the man ” of Premature Ejaculation so also the definition and diagnose etc has been made by him and his staff..
You can translate it and can use a lot of info..
So my thesis would be in Dutch..So i will translate your thesis..:-/)
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i would also be very happyif you have some findings..etiologically etc..
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And the following Components:
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5.discussion
6.conclusion
7. biography
8.acknowledgement
Client: 1- biography and acknowledement comes later 2- 1.1 definition according the Modern Medicine . The doctor who is good with Premature Ejaculation in Western Medicine is prof. Waldinger. Maybe u can use his references . There is guidline called, uploaded as material “Guidline diagnose in Dutch, Richtlijnen Premature Ejaculatie” this is very special reference for section 1.1 1.2 1.3 and 1.4 ..You should to Google Translate it because it is in Dutch.. I attached some work of him and researches and especially the 1.1definition,(cause)etiology and treatment etc..U can also use your own references as well..there is a lot of good descriptions on that link.above all in general i want you to mention references in the thesis as footnote..as wel for the TCM part..and dont use acadmic language,i want simple english secundary schoool language.it must be read easily..not too long sentences but short and clear..not boring…thank you”
Client: ” but if it is easy to begin with section 1 you can begin with it. so its your choice”
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“can you say again to the the writer that the ” guideline Diagnose in dutch PRemature Ejaculation ” is a very important source to work with for section 1.1 (1.2) 1.3 and 1.4.. !.2 is DSM-5 ..he can make his own reasearch about it and describe where Premature Ejaculation registered in DSm-5 etc…He also can use other evidence based articles to support the section..and want him to use all of my uploaded evidence based articles in the thesis and mention it as a footnote..He also can use study books Of Macioca 3 books uploaded yet,” Psyche in Chinese Medicine, Foundation and PrActice in Chinese Medicine” 3 books..also all refere as much as can to the books like this if you use sources from..”
2 books -” foundation in CM” and ” Practice of CM”
Introduction 1.Western Medicine and treatment of Premature Ejaculatie(PE). 1.1 Definition 1.2 Diagnose/classification DSM-5 1.3 Causes (etiology) ( 2.1 2.2 2.3 2.4 2.5 ..describe the etiology (ANXIETY and DEPRESSION, chronic prostatitis, chronic pelvic pain syndrome, hyperthyroidism, (EVIDENCE BASED ARTICLES)beside the story you have, so you pull out something important out of the evidence based articles) 1.4 Treatments in western medicine.. ( 2.6, 2.7 en 2.8, ..describe the treatment in Modern Medicine bsides the evidence based articles like( acupuncture and western medicine , herbs and cognitive TCM therapy)_ (beside the story you have, you pull out something important out of the evidence based articles) all of this below mentioned evidence based articles should be used in section 1..with a good connected story.. (2. Scientific researches on prematuree ejaculation 2.1 Anxiety 2.2 Depression/Alexythimia 2.3 chronic prostatitis 2.4 chronic pelvic pain syndrome 2.5 hyperthyrodism 2.6 Acupuncture and Western(Modern Medicine) 2.7 Herbs 2.8 Cognitive TCM therapy)
and 1.2 is diagnose according the DSM-5 ..what does it mean it for the DSM-5..etc
Premature Ejaculation and DSM-5
when Modern MEdicine knows that PE belongs to DSM-5 the treatment will be easier etc..so thats his part of the draft
he knows what is DSM-5?
make a description of the dsm-5 and classify Premature Ejaculation according to dsm-5 ..with a fine story and references
if he doesnt read all my descriptions it will be tough thesis
maybe he can include 1.2 in 1.1
the way client talks it seems hard to satisfy them, again the order is complex, so it will be hard to satisfy this client, besides, some books needed in this paper are in dutch, I have to convert them to English first, which makes it more hectic in the story of 1.1 he can mention the DSM-5 and the Premature Ejaculation