basic argument on arizonas poor school system

basic argument on arizonas poor school system   Order Description   if possible 900 words Essay #2: Brief Argument Grading Rubric Ideas and Content: 55 Points Possible Essay contains at least 900 words. Essay content focuses on developing and supporting an argument about a local topic. Thesis statement is focused, specific, and logical. Ideas and explanations are developed and well-supported Quoting is kept to an appropriate minimum and is used only to emphasize points or provide brief examples. Counterarguments are addressed and responded to (refuted/rebutted). Major points are explained fully and complexly. Essay maintains an effective blend of ethos, pathos, and logos. Score Organization: 25 Points Possible Introductory paragraph is attention-grabbing and introduces the topic and argument. A thesis statement placed at the end of the introduction outlines the stance/position concerning the issue at hand. Each body paragraph is focused on one main idea that relates to and supports the thesis. Transitional words, phrases/sentences and/or paragraphs link ideas, sentences, and paragraphs together. Conclusion paragraph is well-developed and recaps the thesis while offering final insights and conclusions. The essay flows smoothly from beginning to end. All paragraphs are relevant and do not go off on tangents. Score Source Use, Formatting, and In-Text References: 10 Points Possible Source information is woven in smoothly and effectively. Methods of source use (summarizing, paraphrasing, and quoting) are appropriately and effectively used. Proper MLA formatting is followed. References and in-text citations comply with MLA standards. Score Language Use, Sentence Fluency, and Grammar: 10 Points Possible Language use is college-level and academically appropriate in tone and style. Sentences are structurally complete and flow logically and fluidly, one to the next. A variety of sentences (simple, compound, and complex) convey complex ideas in meaningful ways. Writing is free of grammar errors and typos.   What I have so far (1) the issue and controversy - arizona is misappropriating their funding and the schools all around the state are suffering. They are hiring under qualified teachers to save money and in turn, we have one of the worst education systems in the entire US. From this, students suffer because it ruins their overall chances of being successful in universities and life in the future.   (2) why you feel it is important - This is an important issue because if the youth are being forced to go to school, then they should be building skills that will aid them in creating a future for themselves. This way it gives them a chance to pursue further education and succeed or at least leaving them with enough information and drive to chase some sort of dream, and or career.   (3) your current stance or view on what should be done to address/solve the issue (your argument) - I believe that if we find a way to direct more funds into the arizona schools systems it would immediately create a better condition of living for the citizens of this state.   (4) why your stance/view is logical. - This statement is entirely plausible for several reasons. Even if most of these children were not to pursue further education, they would already have the necessary building blocks to be an intelligent contributing person of society if their initial schooling was something with legitimate substance. If you can't provide a decent education to the children in the first chapter of their life how can you expect them to go any farther already at an unfair disadvantage. It would attract more families from all over the US, making it more appealing to bring a family here. We already have the beautiful scenery and the amazing food, all we're missing is the confident educated people able to give back to what's already been created.   Arizona is misappropriating their funding and the schools all around the state are suffering. They are hiring under qualified teachers to save money and in turn, we have one of the worst education systems in the entire US.(link to us school leaderboards i guess) From this, students suffer because it ruins their overall chances of being successful in universities and life in the future. This is an important issue because if the youth are being forced to go to school, then they should be building skills that will aid them in creating a future for themselves. This way it gives them a chance to pursue further education and succeed or at least leaving them with enough information and drive to chase some sort of dream, and or career. I believe that if we find a way to direct more funds into the Arizona schools systems it would immediately create a better condition of living for the citizens of this state. This statement is entirely plausible for several reasons. Even if most of these children were not to pursue further education, they would already have the necessary building blocks to be an intelligent contributing person of society if their initial schooling was something with legitimate substance. If you can't provide a decent education to the children in the first chapter of their life how can you expect them to go any farther already at an unfair disadvantage. It would attract more families from all over the US, making it more appealing to bring a family here. We already have the beautiful scenery and the amazing food, all we're missing is the confident educated people able to give back to what's already been created. Reply to Thread