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english Order Description this going to be the final draft. below are the teachers comments on the first draft and what she wants. The conflict you mention is a good one, but there should be more of a central event described here that is then resolved in a stronger conclusion. The essay doesn't quite feel finished yet. See my marginal comments and attached rubric for additional feedback. For this milestone, you will submit the final draft of your narrative essay. It is to be a revised version of the first draft, which was due at the end of Module Three. As such, it will tell of a personal experience of yours and use the account to make a larger point or illustrate a bigger idea. It must be at least 2 and no more than 3 pages long and follow MLA or APA conventions.