How Film Criticisms Evaluate Digitalization

  How Film Criticisms Evaluate Digitalization: The Case of Disney Animated Film Order Description   research questions were not clear. I still feel that you need to be much more explicit about your research focus and questions, even in the literature review we should, as your readers, be very clear on your own focus and how each step of the discussion of the literature that you are presenting, fits in with /leads up to your focus/ questions/object of study that there was a view that you did not problematic critically the notion of digitisation. I still think you need to do more of this in relation to digitisation and other key concepts. You should do this by discussing the debates, definitions, etc in the literature. Your previous feedback suggested you do not create a case for seeing film criticism as a mechanism for change within the industry. This really doesn't come through still I am afraid so I think really work on the argument here and the evidence you draw on to support that argument. If you can manage to make your literature review more critically engaged then I think you can carry this through to the discussion of empirical findings in the way that your previous feedback suggested you had not done. Really watch out about what you claim and how you relate that to the literature and already existing studies - both in your literature review and in your analysis of your findings. Be careful not to include ideas that don't clearly relate to your stated research questions. This was also a point in your previous feedback.