Paper comments

Order Description after reading the article and other essay drafts, please write one paragraph comment of each drats. comment on three other people's drafts. Is the introduction clear, and does the paper have a clear Thesis Statement at the end of the introduction? Did the writer explain Downing's points? Is the paper organized? Did the writer include enough examples from the Chapter to support his or her ideas? The format: draft comment#1: draft comment#2: draft comment#3: