Proficiency and the areas where you need improvement.

Provide a general introduction describing the areas where you showed proficiency and the areas where you need improvement. Identify specific issues your instructor noted that you agree with, and describe how you will address them. For example, if your instructor noted a place where more information was needed, what additional information will you include, and how will it help clarify your analysis? Identify specific issues your instructor noted that you disagree with, and explain why you disagree. For example, if your instructor noted a place where your conclusions were incomplete, express why they were not. Describe the steps you will take to make improvements in your final draft.