Below are the main instructions to follow for this order to make the research better. Consider these points as a priority before other changes. Then when you have gone through all, you can add your expertise and ideas to improve further.
– Improve on the problem statement.
– Link the main (aim) research’s objective and the research scope and make it clear to understand and connected.
– Make clear how to measure the positive impact of facial recognition technology on existing physical security control by including sufficient analysis to measure the hypothesis’s relationship.
– Improve the objectives of the research and the research questions
– What research method best suits this study? Qualitative or Quantitative?
o Clarify the choice of the research method selected, make it clear and easy to understand.
– Improve the methodology procedure, create a process flow.
– Improve the method of the research; make clear the choice of the framework. A conceptual or theoretical framework, which is suitable for physical security study?
– Improve on the general topic of this research for clear understanding.
– Conduct a critical analysis of the current literature to investigate the strength, weakness, and the research gap to justify conducting the study on this topic.
Check these considerations:
1. What is missing in this research proposal that should have been included? • What is included and is not necessary or should have been removed?
2. What parts of the research proposal are incomplete or create conflict
3. What parts of the research proposal are not well explained
4. Does the chosen methodology fit this research proposal?
Improve the – Research design – Research Approach – Data collection – Data Analysis Methods – Etc. • Does the framework in use right for this type of research? •
5. Are there any hypotheses, objectives, or research questions that should be added? • The literature review part, is it adequate? Do I need to add more references?