Revision techniques for your writing

  Now that you've read about some revision techniques for your writing, it's time to put those concepts to use! For this worksheet, you'll select 3 sentences from your Week 6 Persuasive Essay to edit using the techniques you've learned (specifically those located in part 3 of the reading, "Sentence-Level Revision.") Provide each original sentence, and then the revised version you've come up with. Then, in 1-2 paragraphs, discuss which technique(s) you used to revise your sentences, and why you think the new versions are superior