rhetorical analysis

rhetorical analysis Order Description   This is rhetorical analysis about “ The tents of San Francisco ( https://www.nytimes.com/2016/12/17/opinion/sunday/the-tent-cities-of-san-francisco.html?_r=0) About the whole article 1. Some sentences stand in my opinion. In other words, they are not stand in the author‘s ground. 2.needs some image of San Francisco such as liberty freedom and so on 3.MLA format 4.Gramma   The second paragraph 1.The sentences marked red needs more explanation connect to the tents of San Francisco 2.The second paragraph needs some image of San Francisco which is concerned about liberty freedom and so on The third paragraph 1. More analysis 2. The conclusion of the third paragraph needs more connection to the logic The fourth paragraph 1. Reanalysis the sentence makes in blue?it is off the article? 2. More deep analysis 3.The conclusion of the third paragraph needs more connection to the ethos The fifth paragraph 1. It is out of the article. Rewrite it. The sixth paragraph 1. Needs a new conclusion after editing