The Global Geopolitics of Energy A Study of Non-Conventional Resource Revolution

The Global Geopolitics of Energy A Study of Non-Conventional Resource Revolution Order Description Changes that should definitely be made: - in the abstract you made a statement, where is the evidence? Where is the research question? The abstract should also be less judgemental. - Change the citing from Chicago to Harvard. - in the introduction for the statement you made is very strong, you should add more citations, references to support it (example Daniel Yergin). - show the shift that is happening in the industry. not everything is either oil and gas or renewables. you have renewables such as the Nuclear energy are very bad for the environment. Also coal is for example predominately used in Germany, which is worse than the use of oil. - show the complexity of the oil and gas industry. - Get out of the "renewables" dream, the truth is much more complicated.