You offer a compelling argument about the pros of GMOs. Present some research to support your words. For example: which are the vast environmental benefits? Only for this section, be a little more analytical.
P. 5 "should not be industrialized (Geografica)". Explain this reference by adding a quote/footnote.
For the Reflection: explain why it is interesting to you. Explain how one of these subjects could affect you in any way.