Essay thesis should be: Lowering the voting age to 16 years old is necessary in order to promote youth engagement in democracy, tackle age inequality, and ensure a more representative government.
I’ve written an outline with the requirements, please try to follow it, Its titled OUTLINE in the pdfs ive attatched.
Essay needs 3 body paragraphs, the claims for these paragraphs should be: -Lowering the voting age will promote youth engagement in democracy
-Lowering the voting age will tackle age inequality
-Lowering the voting age will ensure a more representative government
essay also needs a counterargument with evidence and rebuttal to counterargument.