College admissions essay from PERSONAL EXPERIENCE

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It has to be based on personal experience. My teacher wants me to use a Sandwich Method. The Sandwich Method is to 1. captivate a paragraph showing one specific interesting story or scene from your life (5 sentences).

  1. Elaborate: a paragraph showing how that story connects to your dreams, goals, or passions (5 sentences).
  2. Captivate a paragraph that returns to that first story and connects it to the elaboration, if possible (3 sentences). This is what my teacher wants me to do. It’s not really an essay I’m just letting you do it because of IM BUSY.

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