Is the author successful in explaining the drug war is a failure
This paper is about my view on if the author Johann Hari is successful in his book, “Chasing the Scream”, the paper is written it just needs to be edited and worked on to make it flow better. This was my professors comment on the paper. Also properly cite my evidence.
Generally good organization and presentation of evidence. But none of your paraphrases are cited, which is plagiarism. And your summary of a blend of fact and opinion. It almost reads like an extended thesis, and it shouldn't. They're separate. The summary/thesis needs to be redone.