Rich conversation between two characters.

You should: 1. Add some more specific plot. (some small plots under the big storyline)(the bird decided to stay with the girl for days and help the girl with her troubles. During the time she stays with the young girl and
solving a problem together —- The story of solving a problem/ What happened during their daily life.)

2. Rich conversation between two characters.
   3.Character should be vivid and have emotion.
   4.Blends smoothly with the original story.